Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
What does truly define the responsibilities of a good corporation? While some may contend that their main objective is to mint money, others support that these companies should be responsible for promoting well being of the society and environment as well. I believe that while adhering to the country’s laws, a corporation ought to promote well being of the environment.
It would not be wrong to say that the 21st century is one of the most precarious eras in the history of human life. With global warming and pollution burgeoning across the globe, it is high time that we as citizens take precautionary measures to preempt the detrimental issues are Earth is facing. The glaciers are melting at a drastic rate, the sea temperatures are rising and the air quality in some places are even below healthy living conditions. Hence, in addition to the goals of the business, every individual must be evangelists of sustainability and well being of the environment.
Firstly, I am an upholder of giving back to the society. We all, as humans owe a great deal to the environment we live in, and the least we can do is ensure a salubrious environment to live in. While making money is equally important, it should not be done at the cost of society’s well-being. I believe that SpaceX is a quintessential example to elucidate this further. Elon Musk, the billionaire owning SpaceX and Tesla is working in a way never seen before to make the Earth a great planet to live on. His radical approach and visionary strategies to tackling problems of fuel shortage, global warming and road congestion are changing the way humans are going to live 25 years from not. The Tesla electric cars belong to some of the most elite brands in the world, and while the company is making millions, these cars are environment-friendly and work solely on electricity, reducing the air pollution by a huge 76%. The Hyperloop is changing the face of transportation, using energy efficient equipment and reduce travel time drastically.
Secondly, I believe that no matter what field the company works in, the onus of setting a good example is on the corporation itself. Google, which was born as a search engine 20 years ago is working to build devices and gadgets which aid the disabled and striving to make their experiences in the world joyful and easy. Their technologies tackle multiple problems: from accessible screen reading modes for the visually challenged to self-driving cars and bikes for the people with walking disabilities, and being a technology giant, they set a brilliant example to look up to for other companies as well.
In conclusion, I believe that if we as a human race want to survive on this planet for the next century, every individual should support the initiative of promoting environmental and societal well being. Every mission begins with a small step, and no matter what the goal of the corporation is, it should not risk the environmental in any way.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.5258426966 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2477.0 2235.4752809 111% => OK
No of words: 503.0 442.535393258 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92445328032 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73578520332 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98711706441 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 267.0 215.323595506 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530815109344 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 776.7 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4587917604 60.3974514979 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.85 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.15 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95 5.21951772744 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243462996159 0.243740707755 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652352854694 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628280199038 0.0758088955206 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13489986973 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0935320088371 0.0667264976115 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 100.480337079 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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