Some people believe that corporations have the responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make

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Some people believe that corporations have the responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.

Big corporations are not just companies, but also a big influence on the society it operates in. Therefore, corporations should have the responsibility in promoting the well-being of the environments they operate in, as it serves as an example for the rest of the society to follow.

In our everyday lives, we hear names of big corporations very often. Turning on the news, reading the daily newspaper, or scrolling through an article online, there are always things in circulation relating to corporations and their activities. In the world we live in, corporations are not only companies, but also a big influence on the place it operates and serves in. Therefore, corporations should have the responsibility in promoting the well-being of the societies and environments they operate in, as it serves as an example for the rest of the society to follow.

Corporations demand a great deal of resources for their operations to run smoothly. Take, for example, an illustrious textbook company. The company’s main source of profit comes from selling textbooks, and in order to produce these, they must allocate a great amount of trees from the forest. If the process of taking down the trees was badly done, resulting in the damage of the forest area and the habitats of animals living there, it would also hinder the textbook company’s future as they destroyed an area where they could get their resources from. Thus, for a corporation to continue doing well, they must look at the overall picture and be careful in their actions. Being reckless and damaging the environment does not only harm the nature and wildlife there, but also the corporation’s prospective amount of profit they would earn.

Many corporations, because of their brand value and reputation, are often times under the public eye for the things they do. For instance, a famous chemical company that pours their waste into their neighboring waterbodies may trigger other smaller companies in doing so. People may justify that, because such a large corporation is doing this, it is fine for them to do the same. However, that is not the case! As a result, many fish, wildlife, and other activities are harmed. In other areas, like the fishing industry, people may have a hard time fishing for healthy fish to sell, as the chemicals have either killed or damaged all the fish. Therefore, by a detrimental action that one company does, a series of consequences follow, negatively impacting the environment and society. A corporation should not only want to make profit, but also live up to their reputation as a well-known and just company.
On the contrary, many examples we see on the news about corporations not taking care of the environment may arise from the fact that the government does not impose strict laws on bigger corporations for them to follow. For example, some corporations may feel it is not their problem to take responsibility for environmental problems, in the hopes that another corporation would do the job for them. This way, no one steps up to take the responsibility, ending up with many environmental and societal damages caused by corporations. Therefore, to limit the chances of this happening, governments should come up with stricter laws more specific to the corporation, so that each corporation must abide to the law with no chances of a leeway.

A corporation may operate across many different countries and environments, influencing the people, wildlife, and nature associated with them. For such well-known corporations, there should be responsibility for them to care for the areas they operate in. In the long run, promoting the well-being of the societies and environments a corporation functions in will enhance the performance and earning of the corporation, as well as ensure that nothing is harmed in the process. Earning profit is, of course, important, but no matter how big the scale of business is, one should not forget that the people, nature, and wildlife of a place are not simply commodities that can be harmed and replaced. To damage a whole place is to take away a culture, and no price can ever be paid for that to be brought back.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 34, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...y. A corporation may operate across many different countries and environments, influencing...
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Line 10, column 194, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean ''?
...ell-known corporations, there should be responsibility for them to care for the areas they ope...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, of course, as a result, as well as, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.4196629213 177% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 14.8657303371 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 90.0 58.6224719101 154% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3491.0 2235.4752809 156% => OK
No of words: 693.0 442.535393258 157% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03751803752 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.13077900149 4.55969084622 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99637781617 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 308.0 215.323595506 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.444444444444 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1099.8 704.065955056 156% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.10617977528 290% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 11.0 1.77640449438 619% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.38483146067 274% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5779858541 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.678571429 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 23.4991977007 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.21951772744 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282678192673 0.243740707755 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858842399607 0.0831039109588 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838516162611 0.0758088955206 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178548121014 0.150359130593 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630963957195 0.0667264976115 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 139.0 100.480337079 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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