Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible. Address both viewsrsa
With the fast increase of the population of the countries, the economy becomes more convoluted and diverse than the past; therefore, a large number of firms and corporations become famous because of their specific responsibilities. Many people believe that the companies have to try their best to promote the economy of society by focusing on solving social and environmental problems. I agree with this opinion merely to an extent.
To begin with, there are many scientists who believe that the well-being of the society and economy of countries rely on the endorsement of the corporations of the country on solving the environmental problem. Many believe that increasing the environmental problems in the countries can cause severe damages to the human health. For instance, for many years in my country, the main goal and focus of the corporations were on making more money by exporting and importing the necessary goods; however, after a couple of years, because of ignoring many environmental issues, these kinds of issues become a serious threat for human health. Therefore, in this situation, they have to pay more money to solve this kind of problem.
Secondly, one of the most important issues of the developing countries is that they face many problems in their society. For instance, in the developing countries such as United States of America society made from diverse culture and people from all part of the world; for this reason, the governments face many problems in their countries because of these cultural differences. Many years ago, Abraham Lincoln decided to consider the color differences among people and abolished the slavery laws. As a result, many countries need some corporations to manage social problems to improve the well-being of the society. However, the countries that their corporations only focus on making more money might face many social problems than other countries.
On the other hand, many believe that the main propose of the corporations is developing and improving the economy of countries by making more money. These kinds of corporations can provide the job opportunity for the new generation of the countries, in this way, they can prevent the economy from recession and inflation. However, in countries which have many kinds of corporations that just focus on solving environmental and social problems, many economic problems have to neglect.
In sum, according to all above mentioned, it is crystal clear that the countries need the balance number of the corporations that the main propose of them is to solve the environmental, society and economy problems. However, having more corporations that can manage the environmental and social problems have more benefit than harm to the well-being of the society and must be addressed on the case-by-case bases.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 134, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...d and diverse than the past; therefore, a large number of firms and corporations become famous be...
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Line 3, column 751, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y social problems than other countries. On the other hand, many believe that the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, kind of, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2366.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 450.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25777777778 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89560245549 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.406666666667 0.4932671777 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 751.5 704.065955056 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.38483146067 251% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4660359268 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.176470588 118.986275619 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4705882353 23.4991977007 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58823529412 5.21951772744 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185461241098 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752701673812 0.0831039109588 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473345777654 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122468190996 0.150359130593 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244020631571 0.0667264976115 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 48.8420337079 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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