Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
concentration has an incontrovertible affect on everyone's ability. In fact, it is vitally important to start educating our children task management in order for the best result to follow suits as they are the pillars and this power will guide our nation toward progress. when comes to the statement, some people may agree with the idea and give us sound reasons for their believe. On the other hands, some people might disagree and have other opinions. Also those opponents probably will provide us with puissant evidences to support their thoughts. I am strongly agree with the statement and believe people cannot do well when multitasking, the reasons go as follows.
To begin with, task management has an influential and tremendous impact on our lives. Nowadays, people always do many things to prove their capability in a short time but this always cause them self-defeating. Take myself as an example, I joined two extracurricular activities in sophomore which were orchestra and basketball team to improve my grade point average but my clever only to end in blunder, my marks dropped drastically.
After listening to lecturer opinion, I suspended basketball team and focus on my schoolwork, as the result, my marks improved.
Secondly, I believe different people have their own interest and capable field. Instead of doing many different kind of activities, people should focus and strengthen what they are capable in. Most people doing various activities by imitating others this action cannot meet their desires.Moreover, many studies with have been done by many universities in United states constantly stated that multitasking will cause tremendous distraction on our ability, and more studied was studying this subject. finally, scholar prove the examination, this experience make me believe concentration is a best way to do things well.
For all what have been discussed may finally draw a conclusion that people should concentrate on their interest and avoid doing many things in one time, this can help us to improve our result in a short time. this action can help us improve our social life. people who hold different opinion have right to believe. but my opinion and others people are overwhelmingly to much to be ignored.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...on and others people are overwhelmingly to much to be ignored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, in fact, kind of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1891.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 362.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22375690608 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89471261624 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563535911602 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.4586801918 48.9658058833 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.055555556 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255721999108 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823819021005 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705185524916 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129349853323 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0828585926588 0.0645574589148 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.