Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking Web site.Use specific reasons and examples t

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking Web site.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Education has an influential and a fabulous leverage on our daily life. It is utterly important to appreciate its indelible impact on our society. Although some people hold the viewpoint that teaching children in our recent era are a hard mission to achieve because of the modern technology which occupy most of their time. However, others may hold a different intellect and disagree with this notion. My personal experience and actual observation of life had led me to agree with the idea that the educational process are more easily to done trhan in the past. In the following essay, I shall delve into most outstanding reasons.

Firsta nd foremost, young people study as agroup by using modern technology, They solving mathmatical problems by calling each others . Furthermore, the teachers also have their own social network in which th estudents could ask his teacher to clear any point may miss during the class. For instance, when my daughter have a test in math for inetegers and it was hard to solve some problems. she call her friends to explain what the teacher said in the class and they discuss together. They was able to solve all the problems easily but get struggle in one point. Theymake a video call to their teacher who was attending a soccer games for her son to explain the whole method to solve such a problems. Furthermore, she reminds them of one games that they can play and solve these questions in an enjoying way to keeps all the mathmatical role easy to remeber.

In addition, most of the homework done in the school and the students have more spare time to spend with their families and peer. This have been proved by many surveys in increasing the percentage of excellent achievement for students who spend more time in playing at home than those who study. For example, Poland was consider the number one country in the high grades amoung its teenagers. After many study they made to search for mthe reasons how they could boosts their future young people grades. The experts found to ;et the children play in their home whatever they want and keeps the study in school. According to the experts, the reasons for this huge and excellent achievement, is the reliefing for the students stress in their home an denjoying each and evey moment of their time with their belongs.

To sum up, judging what I have mentioned before, taking all the factors inot account, I would reinforce the idea that the educational process are efortless tasks in the present time than before because they can learn by using these methods and contact their ally and professors at the same time and can enjoy their home time so they could back to school fresh and ready ot learn with love.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, for example, for instance, in addition, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2241.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 469.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77825159915 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65364457471 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40065725873 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537313432836 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 678.6 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.820394585 48.9658058833 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.05 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.45 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17622403758 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494529162846 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332669414356 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108051193459 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296487220422 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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