Many people visit museums when they travel to new places.Why do you think people visit museums? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
People visit museums for many reasons. We can learn new knowledges and have fun by the simple museum visit when we travel a foreign country. Even though, some people find it unuseful activity I believe that they are significant part of our life.The lines will shed on light my viewpoint.
First, you can learn many things about the culture of a country by the visiting its museums in a short time. Wasting time in a museum works to people's advantage because they teach us its culture, traditions, customs, and even foods. They tell not only its history but also current position and give idea about what will be in near future. We can give an example of technology museums. On the one hand, they show its past and current condition on the other hand, they inspire you for future.
Secondly, even you do not like history you can like museum because they are not only about history but also about technologies, rock stars, photographers, individuals. There are many people, alive or dead, who have private museum. Elvis for example, you can visit his house and see his guitars or visit his bedroom. I cannot believe that one can feel bored in this kind exhibition centers.
Finally, taking all aforementioned reasons into the account, one cannot dent the importance of museum in our life. Visiting a museum in a foreign place is first thing to do because we can have enjoyable time there and It teaches us place's story.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 52.1666666667 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1187.0 1977.66487455 60% => OK
No of words: 248.0 407.700716846 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78629032258 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43918952759 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 618.680645161 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4994251175 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7857142857 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316583318921 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115588042086 0.076458572812 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0882780510164 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199514770911 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579128272154 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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