Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.**
In the era of media, obtaining information about a new topic or subject which may be health related, food related, education related or daily commodities related is nothing but a click on the television or a glance of observation. To keep up to date about new horizon, advertisement paves the congenial way to respond to new happenings. That’s why to be informed about a new product is not cumbersome, rather very trifling matter today, which is an instantaneous betterment of this modern world I think. Moreover, I believe that getting information about a new product is totally amusing as in most of the cases, advertisement based products circulate improved product. That’s why I wholeheartedly agree with this latter part of the statement and put forward on three different logics in respect of it.
To embark on, new products is activated in the market due to the demand of customers. We all know now and then change of a product is a burning question, especially in this 21 century. Likewise Phone Company enthralls customer myriad by bringing about new subtle features. Basically these advanced types are needed to the customers as without it, people will not extract the real merriment by using it. For instance, recently I changed my mobile phone in lieu of Asus Zenfone. Before buying my new phone, I did not know how to offer finger print, how to keep files in phone secured. Besides my previous camera was not up-to-dates, that’s why I even if take a photo of my study materials. In the meantime I watched an advertisement of Asus where it’s all types features was described, I was just astonished at hearing the conveniences of it. Within a few minutes I rediscovered myself that I had to take it as I felt a problem of taking photo in my camera. Moreover modification of phone eases me to keep my files secured and there w is no touch problem in my phone. What I meant by this is that by only advertisement, I had the chance to meet up my demand.
In addition, to cope up with this world, we have to be congruent in all types of technological advances along with all other aspects. Nowadays there is fashion of using loafer shoes and cast a spell of different type of customers. Undoubtedly, it can be said that without advertisement we did not know about its pros and cons. As a result we lagged behind the outdated thinking and more specially we don’t get the touch of modern thoughts. From my personal experience, I used to wear long shirts and it seemed odd. But after observing an advertisement where the model used a new brand short shirt that was fabulous. No sooner had I watched the ad than I decided to buy it. Now even if my boss is pleased that I am modern in my appearance and it has already affected a lot of my company that easily correspondents with foreign members due to my presence of outlook.
Last but not least we keep ourselves into a cave if we don’t get information about a new product. We don’t buy washing machine or heater without advertisement. Rather we are helpful to advertisement as it provides different features within a moment via advertisement.
To wrap it up, Advertisement may not be seemed to be unnecessary to a few customers. But if we broaden our boundary we easily make out that without new notion, new change, new advancement, it seems hard nut to crack. However we all know the gist information and to improve our lifestyle via watching advertisements.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 162, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion related or daily commodities related is nothing but a click on the television...
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Line 2, column 185, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Likewise,
...uestion, especially in this 21 century. Likewise Phone Company enthralls customer myriad...
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Line 2, column 966, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...a problem of taking photo in my camera. Moreover modification of phone eases me to keep ...
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Line 4, column 117, Rule ID: BUY_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'by'?
Suggestion: by
...tion about a new product. We don't buy washing machine or heater without adver...
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Line 4, column 170, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Rather,
...achine or heater without advertisement. Rather we are helpful to advertisement as it p...
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Line 5, column 218, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...dvancement, it seems hard nut to crack. However we all know the gist information and to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, likewise, look, may, moreover, so, then, for instance, i mean, i think, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 75.0 43.0788530466 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 96.0 52.1666666667 184% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 8.0752688172 334% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2852.0 1977.66487455 144% => OK
No of words: 602.0 407.700716846 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73754152824 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.95335121839 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99587653469 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 303.0 212.727598566 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503322259136 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 921.6 618.680645161 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6484469209 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0666666667 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190461437355 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052859399642 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383251079598 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123557977168 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347817870386 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 143.0 86.8835125448 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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