Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Information revolution has long become a familiar term for all people with different professions, it reflects the immense penetration of technology and especially the Internet into the life of every person and being an indispensable part of modern living. The mounting development of information infrastructure and the increasing availability of information cause numerous changes in today world. People nowadays enjoy the wide availability of accessible and valuable information, employing it to improve the quality of living and working, as well as being a driving force for a great number of breakthroughs to come to being.
The inexhaustible source of information provided by the Internet contributes to constructing a better world with the enhancement of working and living conditions. Since its application, the Internet has gradually transformed our ways of managing our daily lives. For example, people are no longer keeping the never-ending notes to keep every task on track, however, today they can seek for necessary information at every time or place convenient with just a device connecting to the Internet. Furthermore, a complete change is already taken place in the business world, which can ben seen in the advancement of business models and better decision-making processes. Specifically, since the information asymmetry is one of the most problematic issues with every party involved in business relationship, the availability of online information increases the transparency of business contract that facilitating decision-makers to come with more beneficial decisions. To students, they enjoy the Internet as a rich source for finding materials needed for their studies, and it has exerted a great impact on the improvement of education in general. For instance, students nowadays no longer deal with the scarcity of literature as in the past due to the fact that they can find all related research fitting their interest by just a click. All in all, the availability of information fuelled by the development of the Internet has completely changed the patterns of our lives in a more convenient and advanced way.
The wide availability of information accessible on the Internet has also induced many innovations and breakthroughs in every field come to being. However, some argue that since everything is made available on the Internet, people hardly find new ideas and motivation to work out for new findings. it is reasonable that people tend to be idler and increasingly dependent on the Internet that they lack incentives to produce new ideas. Nevertheless, the Internet has accelerated the rate of new innovations as well as the production of new knowledge at an astonishing rate. Indeed, since researchers are able to find necessary resources for their study, many impediments for innovations have alleviated thanks to the Internet. Those resources can be both economic matter and scientific matter for the fact that the lack of funding is one of the most common hindrances for new scientific projects. Indeed, scientists nowadays can easily raise funds for their research by promoting them on social networks and even get assistance from their colleagues from different universities or laboratories in the world. In fact, many scientists have successfully got finance for their projects through the Internet. Hence, the internet produces more advantages and disadvantages, enabling researchers and scientists to get necessary requirements to make their projects.
In conclusion, the Internet has offered the world with unprecedented convenience and yielded numerous positive changes in both the scope of each individual to the business and scientific world, it not only facilitates each person in both his/her personal and working lives but also encourages the emergence of new innovations that will change the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 298, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...otivation to work out for new findings. it is reasonable that people tend to be id...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in general, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 88.0 52.1666666667 169% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 8.0752688172 322% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3263.0 1977.66487455 165% => OK
No of words: 593.0 407.700716846 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50252951096 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.93473315629 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21570348007 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 279.0 212.727598566 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470489038786 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1036.8 618.680645161 168% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 10.0 3.08781362007 324% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.9749958047 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.380952381 100.406767564 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2380952381 20.6045352989 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153493461792 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522898627754 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386353614918 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0991647548851 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443970431806 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 11.7677419355 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 58.1214874552 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 10.9000537634 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 158.0 86.8835125448 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 10.002688172 165% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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