Some people suggest that it is wrong to give money to beggars asking for money on the street, while others think that it is the right thing to do. Which point of view do you think is correct, and why?
We can spot beggars in almost every city, and it is an important issue for government and citizens. Although many people feel emotional about beggars and try to help them by providing money, I would say that we shouldn't trust and help every single beggar on the street. My reasons are elaborated on hereunder.
First of all, There is no clear evidence for each beggar in the streets, that they are absolutely in need. We cannot trust strangers. Moreover, they can even turn out to be involved in a fraud. For instance, once I heard in the news that police have arrested a gang of swindlers who introduced themselves as poor beggars and consequently they have gained millions of dollars by this fraud. Actually, they have took advantage of people's trust and empathy. Since I heard that news I have never helped beggars in the street because I don't want to help bad people even with low chance of possibility that they are really cheaters. By the way if we want to help beggars, at least we should give careful attention, in order to be sure whether beggars are truly in need or not.
Also I believe that, money never comes easy, whether you are reach or poor, you need to try hard to gain money. No body have become reach in one night, undoubtedly they had passed hard and hopeless days until they achieved success. This is an important lesson to teach children as they grow up. When we help a beggar and give him or her money, we are helping to illustrate the concept of gaining money without any effort. As a result people with financial problems may decide to sit on the streets and earn money without any effort. Undoubtedly, there are plenty of simple works that beggars can be engaged with, especially when beggars are healthy and young, they have a potential to work and be productive instead of sitting aimlessly on the street and asking others to help them, while they can try and find a suitable job. People should learn that they could not become reach by ease and instead of begging on the streets, they should stand and find a job, in that way, not only they can earn money but also they help economy to be more dynamic.
As a conclusion, I do not believe that we should give money to beggars asking for money on the streets. While many people may believe that it is a kind thing to do, I think that disadvantages outweigh the advantages and we should not spread the culture of helping beggars while they can work and be productive instead of standing on the streets. Never have I helped the beggars on the street, others should stop giving money to beggars, in order to help society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, first, if, may, moreover, really, so, while, at least, for instance, i think, as a result, by the way, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2145.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 470.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56382978723 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35079328375 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470212765957 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 652.5 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.5996301765 48.9658058833 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.25 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225925975518 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788649286901 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796222768286 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16769542756 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0979978489788 0.0645574589148 152% => OK
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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