TPO-37-2
Do you agree or disagree with the following statements?
Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is no doubt that our life has been reshaped by technology in more than one way which in this modern life people have to do different tasks simultaneously. Although, some people claim that this multitask life can result in the poor performance, I believe that by planning and allocating enough time, people can cope with this life.
Firstly, one the most important factors for dealing with multi-tasking life is having a well-organized plan. If people do their tasks base a strong plan, they would be successful for managing their tasks simultaneously. For example, a couple of years ago, during student life, I was employed by a company and at the same time I was learning English language. At the first step, I had problem to cope with three tasks, but after planning I became successful with a high performance in each task.
Secondly, if people set goals for themselves and put lots of effort to achieve their goals, they can do their task very well. For example, the statistics shown that the most important criteria among chines people who have a multi-task life is setting goals for themselves.
Admittedly, doing multi tasks altogether can have damage to the efficiency of people’s tasks, because people have to give attention to all the task, nevertheless, there are a thousand of successful people who do their tasks very well by planning and putting effort. A clear example is related to professor in the universities which not only teach student different lessons, but also conduct new researches or devise new technology.
To conclude that, for those reasons, it seems to me that people are successful to do various tasks by planning and setting goals for themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, for example, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 283.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9964664311 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83003354883 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565371024735 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.3175715218 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.545454545 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7272727273 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 5.45110844103 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145843791204 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657274231672 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432100969297 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0944156448772 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302250682624 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.