TPO26-It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents’ jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents’ job.
In the dilemma of choosing a job, the advice of parents is quite decisive. Parents usually want their children to live the life they have always dreamed but never achieved. They usually suggest their children to enter a totally different area. Nevertheless, I strongly believe children would benefit more considerably if they choose a profession similar to their parents'.
First of all, children can readily access to the pile of experience their parents have accumulated during a long time. Their parents can shed light on the obstacles and barriers their child might confront with in that field. Furthermore, the child can benefit from what they parents inherited for them. As an instance, a businessman possessing a famous company or a politician who has made a variety of connections and friends can support their children considerably.
Another advantage, which is noteworthy, is that following the footsteps of parents can strengthen the parent-child bond. In this modernized era that it is stated that a great distance has been made among family members, having a mutual subject of conversation can help a lot. When a father talks about frustrations and numerous failures he had, it could be more interesting for the child to listen to such inspiring statements and experiences he is currently dealing with.
Finally yet importantly, following parents’ careers could save both time and energy. Society has to dedicate a lot of resources to prepare people for working. This is while children can easily learn from their parents as an skillful mentor.
Given the reasons illustrated above, it would be a more acurate decision for children to follow their parents’ profession as it would benefit themselves, their family and the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 276, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'parent'
Suggestion: parent
...e, the child can benefit from what they parents inherited for them. As an instance, a b...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...iences he is currently dealing with. Finally yet importantly, following parents’ car...
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Line 7, column 222, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... can easily learn from their parents as an skillful mentor. Given the reasons i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, then, while, as to, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 280.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28571428571 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8699623122 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592857142857 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7396067182 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6666666667 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338503537342 0.236089414692 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114992647268 0.076458572812 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802941844391 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178491675035 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0938569398934 0.0645574589148 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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