Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people visit museums? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Museums are art galleries of ancient belongings. People visit museums to understand and know the ancient cultures, ancient belongings of the ancestors of that particular place.
According to me, museums are storage of knowledge. Whatever, we have learned in books about past histories, museums store them. Museum is the only access through which publics are made familiar with ancient belongings.
When I was in class 7, I learned about extinct animals like woolly mammoth, golden langur and many other animals. But, recently when I went to kolkata museum, I saw the relic of these animals. Reading something in book doesnot give us a clear view, but when we see and feel them we can have a clear concept about the features.
Again museums are also great storage of ancient cultures. In museums, we can find how ancestors of different cultures used to dress, what are the different means they used to feed themselves. When people from one country travel to another country, they can have a clear knowledge of the ancient cultures of that country if they visit museums.
However, museums also play a major role in expanding our knowledge. A museum may be science museum, art museum and much more. Science museum helps people in expanding their knowledge in science. Childrens are taken to museums to give a clear view of what they have studied in their course.
Thus, when people are visiting some new places, they should visit museums of that place.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...ancestors of that particular place. According to me, museums are storage of knowledge. What...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'thus']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.246376811594 0.229887763892 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.163043478261 0.158761421928 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0869565217391 0.0866891130778 100% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0289855072464 0.046263068375 63% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0760869565217 0.0685040099705 111% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0978260869565 0.118717715034 82% => OK
Participles: 0.036231884058 0.0351676179071 103% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.43902736241 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0289855072464 0.0309702414327 94% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0688405797101 0.0887237588012 78% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.018115942029 0.0209618222197 86% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.036231884058 0.0139019557991 261% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1462.0 2387.08602151 61% => OK
No of words: 244.0 408.028673835 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.99180327869 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.48200974243 88% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.372950819672 0.338922669872 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.303278688525 0.251872472559 120% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.155737704918 0.174417080927 89% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.102459016393 0.112833075102 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43902736241 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549180327869 0.524397521467 105% => OK
Word variations: 53.1223882718 59.2087087015 90% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 15.25 20.5533526081 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7248300823 48.84282405 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.375 120.699889404 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 20.5533526081 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4375 0.644075263715 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.5376344086 132% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 45.5778688525 45.7405998639 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.41891891892 1.45489161554 98% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261878782107 0.300154397459 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.113726873229 0.103427244359 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.102125806727 0.0752933317313 136% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.594081941182 0.497263757937 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.163728797855 0.151897553556 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101460913732 0.114077575197 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780435976512 0.0781384742642 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.178477921056 0.336927656856 53% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0664276815976 0.067059652881 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165463684978 0.210909579961 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727403939942 0.0618886996521 118% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.91756272401 183% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 8.42114695341 36% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 13.6433691756 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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